Otr of the Flame

Chapter 1: The Flame Awakens

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if someone can dump faster ill be willing to switch out

sanna

alajoki

taisto

Spurdo spärde torilla tavataan!

Keep posting.

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He's gotten better with colors. Red Hood had the issue of looking like sickly pastel in its CPs and volume covers.

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Another viking series what happened to the last viking series

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We don't talk about THAT series, ok?

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Cool doublespreads in this. Lets just hope he learned some lessons from Red Hood.

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this is your heroic male MC

I'll be honest:
this still kinda sucks.

I think this is great, why don't you guys like it?
Give me actual reasons

It's formulaic but still a good beginning, also lol at how he had the mc leave his town asap after people were screaming for RH mc to leave the village for multiple chapters.

Let's see how long it will last

Need better scans. The quality being so shit is bringing my enjoyment down.

But I like it though

Its very simplistic in design, but I really like how the sword is drawn. Hope it stays like that, there's something refreshing about it

the author loves twink mc

nobody could beat it when it came to axes

Red Hood but worse

Ichi the Witch but worse

Like I previously said

fire punch but the fire is a loli

viking shit because it is fotm on japan

breathing shit just like kimetsu

he really doesn't want to get axed does he, the pacing is still terrible just like red hood

Also I don't like the characters they are bland and boring

U19 AGAIN

It was... fine I guess.
Otr's design is ass and he's going for a shotaconbait design for some reason, I blame Matsui for this.

It was a better ch 1 than ichis if we are being real

So many years and he's still shit at action, amazing, really.

He's better than most ongoing manga like nue.

Kawaguchifags already on the

if it fails its muh editor's fault

bandwagon.
When the only thing he fixed was the pacing. Everything else sucks just as much but now its just KnY but worse

Nue is shit too.

Did your post get deleted?

Hopefully he doesn't do some shitty exam arc this time around

I blame Matsui

But all of Kawaguchi's works has shotaconbait. How is it someone else's fault?

shota mc

fine

shota mc exposing his belly in a tight as fuck armor that gives him female hips for some reason

Matsui

I didn't want to spoil the fire being a loli so I deleted it lol

You eerily sound like a salty shit editor who could never land a decent series and who ended up being transfered even in a struggling magazine...

i'm so tired of viking shit

I'm one of the anons giving shit already but I do have to agree it is at least better than half of the magazine. Fixing the action would be enough to keep it around despite the other flaws

btw im not dumping next week. i fuck up too much. i will only do it when no one wants to

Honestly just the art is putting like 90% of the magazine to shame, i'm honestly doubtful this time it's getting axed at all seeing the state of wekely shonen. They just need a new manga.

just the art is putting like 90% of the magazine to shame

It's the first chapter, wait until like chapter4-5 when the weekly grind starts.

why does he make all his mcs faggots

He's a kid, do you want him to look like a bodybuilder or what?

Learned under Horikoshi

>shota mc

You know there is more to it. Stop being desingenuous. That design easily falls under the author's sick fetish and considering how he is trying very hard to not get axed again it was him more likely than not

I want him to be more like goku/gon fuck even Gash

one thing he learned tho, not make the mc stay in the fucking village and refuse to leave for 6 chapters, baffling fucking decision

Because he learn from his master

So could his sister be the ice hero then?

will probably be evil at first. I think water will be the second hero to appear

Kawaguchi already leapfrog to be the best jump artist in the current run. I will give fight choreography to kgb atleast

Just need Hori recommendations an this one will be guaranteed alive.

midget

big sword

fire powers

Playing it safe.

This shit is just Ice Head Gill with better art, U19 bait for sure.

Yup axe soon

way too fast

Ice kingdom

Forest kingdom

generic inner demon

generic characters

So ass

midget

He's a kid

What is up with anons obsessed with axe in this thread? Talk about mean-spirit.

Not very good. Also, (I'm sure it's unintentional), but one of the vikings in this chapter bears iconography from a Scandinavian neonazi movement.

I liked it.

KAWAGUCHI IS BACK

Where's the one shot of this?
Also

Only one Big boob character

Hope he fixes this later

There's no one-shot.

Interesting, I thought every manga series has at least a one-shot/pilot chapter before being serialized

>breathing shit just like kimetsu but not schizophrenia and its actually real

Otr won

Reminder what killed red hood is the exam arc

Glinka & Glüna?

Hope he recycles Grimm's design sometime later.

Why would you have a slutty outfit on a clearly skinny shota MC? That doesn't work. Especially not this day and age

i think stretching the prologue to a 6 chapter arc did more damage. I have never seen a prologue that didnt resolve its story arc in ch 1

I think this is the outfit he'll actually wear.

It was charming. Too bad about the execution

Hope the MC is better than blacked clover one. That one was so bad they axed it out of jump

Action scenes needed to be extended.
The MC CLEAVES ALL THE ENEMIES WITH A SINGLE SLASH is pretty boring.

Taguchi

i think he will only power up against stronger boss

I hope he frequently burns off all his clothes and we get to see him naked every fight

So is this just that one Viking manga from last year about the axe or whatever

I'll hijack you pathetic bait to say this: Black Clover now got to the point of cucking the MC for the rival nobody likes. I'm glad it became irrelevant, Tabata and his editor deserve it

Thats the base outfit, his henshin will be burning his top

What happened? Also Noelle > Asta

his ultmate power will be burning his pants as well

What's with all the Vikings lately, is something going on in Japan?

A somewhat niche game came out in Japan 3 years ago called ELDEN RING.

I know he was his assistant and all but it's crazy how much kawaguchi apes horikoshi stylistically.

Asta got ko'd by the main villain again and gave Yuno anti-magic and one of his swords before being teleported away.

Noelle

She got a rushed fight before being reduced to a background character. Seems they got pissed she won the last two popularity polls kek

hopefully we will get the flash back of Bonkers and the big cocked giant that destroyed his village

Its great though. If only he can remove those muscle bitches

eh, this is chapter 1. even OP, bleach only have one punch-one slash fight too..

Gon is scrawny for most of HxH and has legions of fujo fans who want to see him get railed in the ass

I'm glad it became irrelevant

Its never relevant in the first place

Yeah, Noelle is a Queen. The Anime did her favours and her growth is great. Honestly Noelle is the real underdog, specially in the movie, she kicked ass without her powers

Holy fuck, the author's such a massive fucking faggot, and it seems he learned little.

Cool helmet

pros:

-the art overall
-setting, ice/winter
-Vikings
-overall wholesome story beat

cons:
-No memorable characters
-basic power system
-basic conflict (avatar like again, really you just switch it up?)
-No comedy (i love comedy-battle) or not land if he even try
-MC design overall, and the armour maybe he will improve.

how many chapters and arcs we will spend on that fortress???? hope you learn your lesson, kawaguchi!!

I really like this page.

Cutie

She's a great character stuck in a terrible series

His character design feels random, what the FUCK was that disgusting "muscle mommy" gorilla thing, it had a baby head, did this faggot's fetish worsen?

Does this guy even learn anything from redhood?

Only thing I can see he learned is to make it a little more generic and improved art, otherwise he's repeating the same shit.

who cares
there's no competition at all, there's no way this gets axed when roboco nue kiyoshi embers himaten kill blue and other stuff exist

He learned a lot

better art

focus on mc early on

muscle woman is a very minor character instead of co-mc

get mc out of home village immediately

accomplish something and move the plot along in chapter 1

Roboco has comedy protection

babyface

all his stuff is like that idk the appeal

Yeah the tiny head is the worst part, if he gave her better proportions and she was just big and tough that would be better.

Going for a shotabait design will be a good plan if the mangaka taps into his inner bushido spirit and triples down on manifesting ancient nipponese samurai shudō energy in the form of enticing shots of the main boy with his belly exposed and moe moments

>muscle woman is a very minor character instead of co-mc

That was a mistake, but can be fixed later

i dont think so, the movie flopped that badly might get the eic talking

Didn't we just have a viking manga a little bit ago that got axed

The presence of disgusting retarded Gorilla women ruin what otherwise would be a shota loli manga

little bit ago was 2 years

>muscle woman is a very minor character instead of co-mc

Amazing how you guys have brainwashed yourselves into believing Grim was a muscle woman.

There werent vikings in elden ring

2023 was 16 years ago

boring

The MC can cut in half an enemy officer chapter 1

Oh, I'm already seeing the massive powercreep.

ice kingdom

forest kingdom

Jesus, come on.

MC goes warrior mode way too fast for someone who is just a twink cook just a second ago.
Nigga just barely get his new power, it works better if its caught both the MC and the enemy off guard but he seems pretty unfazed.

Elden Ring was generic Medieval Europe, bro.

Most battle shonen have the hero obliterate some dude in the first chapter, doesn't really mean anything in the long run.

Take it up with Miyazaki. He literally said "norse mythology."

He didn't obliterate just a random dude, he was commanding troops. I can only see this scaling upwards with him in 10 chapters destroying so legendary monster or something, this is how the powercreep works.

i agree, ichigo and yuji is freak athlete, so it makes sense when they kickass. but the mc never shown anything, then power fire and bum, neg them all.
even tanjiro learn for what?6 months.

but who care about power scalling anyway.

What I'm saying is that it won't matter. The Sorcerer will get handwaved as a mook and actual enemies will be much stronger. It's always like this, no matter how tough the first enemy gets depicted as in chapter 1 he always get retconned to be a nobody.

Little soldier boy~~

first fanart (not by a nip artist)

Stupid design

saw a couple of posts voting for otr

hakurifag...

Muscle women is a fucking trash fetish for the lowest of the lowest, it's worse than Shotashit which is sometimes passable.

Good oneshot

Viking warrior exam (despite him already being a super powerful swordmage) next chapter

No anon, we get fortress namek next 6 chapters, then viking warrior exam after that

Muscle women is a fucking patrician fetish for the highest of the highest, it's better than ShotaKINO which is passable.

can't get over the head

aura farming won against beethoven

I give this 20 chapters before axe

Should’ve kept the helmet

I DONT WANT TO KILL THE ICE DEMONS!

killing them is just sending them to Valhalla where they wanted to go in the first place

actually a better version than Kimetsu where some of the demons were mindcontrolled into becoming demons and would end up in hell regardless of whether they became demons willingly or not

the face kills it, kawaguchi should have just reused the sullen face he gave the red hood slut.

This dude just fucking can't draw children.

Shota gang shota gang

Endorsing his former assistant

That's nice.

I honestly would drop the series.
Same if that faggy armor ends up being his main, and not a fuckup or a "test"

She's dead already so honestly: what's the difference?

The author already has a big mommy fetish, he might also be a queer

It was okay. I preferred amorphous werewolves and steam punk, hope he actually has a script this time.

the first one is based, but he really needs to change THAT armor, which should happen considering the main MC artwork

make him look like a mini chad, at least

Inb4 he doubles down and he have him willingly cross dress

That actually works for Bugle Call MC

If Matsui taught him well we will see him crossdress

OTTER OF THE FLAME

Big tit paizuri wile being straddled by the flame loli will save this series

that log fire

Oh hey, I saw a video about that a while ago, great attention to detail. IIRC, you take a dry log, split it open just a bit, stuff it with some kindling, and you've got a good fire going with minimal wood cost, and a flat top to put a pot or pan to boot.

Well Thor cross-dressed that one time so it might happen.

This will be WSJ made in abyss

Big women are a gift

A lot of mean bullies, bad taste, and bad arguments ITT, for both sides.
She's just a character. Not everybody has to look like a level 1 mook.

Really doubt it.

How does chapter 2 play out in your retarded mind?

My beloved...

I thought it was a good start, tentatively following

child mc

axed

Damn, I really miss big gals from red hood...

Yeah lets axe HxH too

This isn't a real page, is it?

Of course, it not, anon. Don't be silly.

What does this have to do with the subject about the character design and fate?. A character having a unique or generic design does not confirm shit, surviving or dying. Your post is just retarded.

Because design is just a part of it and if you cracked triple digits I wouldn't have to explain this.

Author is a known Anon Babble god

Faggots show up and spam their unironic shota pedo shit because dumper can't keep his banter to himself

schizo meltdowns already

Red hood bros are we back?

WOLFIUM

Wolfonium

Yeah, dude is a bit fucked in the head, lol

Just like old time.

More like Ice head Gill

ginka speedran like 4 arcs worth of story in the first three chapters

Too big, too fat.
I wonder if you fags even have a mother.

Look, bros... Fap to what you will.
But do your best to support and shill this series, if you really want it to survive and grow, at least as an exister

But I'm a lonely poorfag...

NOT AN ARGUMENT. Share nip fanart, reactions, and reccomend it to more people around... You can do it....

Nope, it's getting AXED hahahahaha

it was set in the red hood universe all along

i can see kawaguchi pull that, red hood was clearly a big world building passion project

I recognize this shitposting style around...
It looks like a mix of one of those edgy Tafukubros and the Kiyoshitposter schizo.

Fuck, whatever. DO NOT FUCK THIS UP, CRAB.

I'd love it if like, chapter 50 Velou and Grimm show up.

Any fanart yet?

edgy Tafukubros

i'm not even posting

No one here can help it. Only nips can determine what lives and dies.

muscle woman jobbed instantly and was forgotten

the editor killed that shit

Kiyoshitposter schizo

I'm enjoying this, stop being a schizo and don't lump me with some imaginary boogeymen

yeah, they gift you a 2 years+ vacation from jump if you make them MC

"I know you're you're a nice guy"

"they're previous retreat"

Lack of revision, English mistakes...

Omni Tafuku, every post is a tafukupost...

crab sensei trying not to insert some muscle mommy

i've been found out

Kawaguchi is sexualizing children from chapter 1, japan gonna love this and it gonna live as long as the gorilas stay as side characters with minimum screentime.

If only your mother wished (you) stop act like a faggot.

Crossdressing will be this manga's version of the shapeshifting power of Otr from norse myths.

So how does he avoid fucking this up like red hood?

He has half the magazine as a cushion

The only reason anyone gave a FUCK about red hood is that they want new fantasy manga

red hood lose eevn when no market. now otr need to compete with ichi bugle call and centuria

now please eat fat black cocks and die otrcucks :DDDDDD

First Japanese comment I translated, oof

black cocks OUT OF NOWHERE

I mean yeah, but half the magazine is a bigger axe candidate and worse drawing
So if it sells 20k-30k it will live like Nue

Syd craft chapter today is hinting at an ending already btw.

no it is not
only in ur BBC addicted delusion
faggot

The thing about Japanese Twitter is that it's a normalfag website but they're just as deranged as we are

Holy Mother of BASED.

jap likes loli and big women

complete women enjoyer

Your response big women deniers?

Those otaku better support. Dude is getting older he's not going to want to do this shit eventually. Yeah one of the first bad comments I saw .At least majority seem good rn. Perfect time to be a semi decent battle shonen right now in jump. The current line up is kinda ass.

Oh that guy?

Yeah, he was fairly strong, but had a tendency to let his guard down.

If you had given him any moment longer he would have had his shit together to fuck you up.

Its not that hard, anon.

Or alternatively

powercreep happens

but the story retroactively decides that this guy from 5 arcs ago is actually super strong and can keep up with the current arc antagonist

One Piece writing or something

Theres the old

You burned too much of your life force on our first time and cant be that strong again

Trope or some variation as to why MC was so strong in chapter 1 but falls behind

I like spirits and elements hopefully it lives.