Makeine: Too many losing heroines

Tomboy MIA

Tiara sex

Tiara sexo

Creates thread centered around Lemon

Gets fucking ignored for a cat girl whore

Lemonbros....

Lemon sucks lmao

Yanami-san... Bassori-san confessed to me.

Yeah, I'm busy getting my lemon juice. Buzz off.

This is gonna devolve into a Hina situation isn't it? Where Basori will keep stalling for an answer.

threads have been fast lately, damn

Basori will probably get drunk after Water says no

This thread needs more Anna.

why do you keep on looking for her?
she doesn't want (You)

I agree.

Give me Bassori, or give me death!

She'll lose in the end, but
Tiara will get Nukumizu's first kiss

No, she's popping his cherry in Volume 12 after they go to a Christmas/Birthday date.

Something finally happened.

even after all this time, I still Anna and her fat ass to win

after all this time, Anna is still chasing Sosuke's dick?

i am actually a Lemonfag, I will believe in her plan even if no one else does

After all this time you're still seething about Anna?

What even is her plan?

Author's pet

Always together in official art

Author loves the pair

The most developed of all

Willowgirl always in Watemean head even when he hangs out with other girls

Couldn't accept Tiara because he thought about "someone else"

Their chemistry runs the whole franchise

Why would someone kid themselves and think she will lose? I'm being serious fags. Tell me how you can be this delusional?

Why would someone kid themselves and think she will lose?

because she already lost

Is the main heroine of the series called "Too Many Losing Heroines!"

what she's doing to nuku is the same shit she did with sosuke
she'll grow up peddling her body somewhere in tokyo to pay back their family debt, imagine getting paid in soba cartons lol

It was a bot replying.

My mistake.

Anna losing again is good for the story, but only if the author is not a hack.
Anna winning is pandering to the masses.
But then his main inspiration is Darling in the Franxx, so it should not be a surprise.

Be honest Anon Babble...how many of you will accept the "route" endings if the author go for that?

Anna losing again is good for the story

I'm genuinely curious what makes you think this?

This girl winning is bad for the story

But MY girl winning is good for the story

So, we've finally reached this stage in these threads? how many volumes we got left? because the shitposting is only gonna get worse from here

what makes you think anna winning is good for the story?
do you like this wishy-washy tsunshit anna is doing?

I'm not reading this for Anna, stop avoiding the question if you're not shitposting

Waifufags are first and mostly Winnerbowlfags. They don't care about their girls, they care about winning. I will always prefer my best girl to be a Losing Heroine, than to be a side hoe. Defeat is always more honorable than being the sloppy seconds.

Anna winning is pandering to the masses

Anna winning is good for the story if she gets back Sosuke
Relative to the other winners we barely know shit about 8k

nta, and while I think Anna will end up winning, her losing because she ended up treating MC the same way she did Sosuke would be a good way of showing how she didn't lose because she has blue hair or is the CF or because she always like Sosuke or whatever but because of her actions, basically saying she actually deserved to lose

she gets back Sosuke

She's not into Sosuke anymore, why are you like this?

Anna becoming a homewrecker is funnier so I wish Nukumizu gets someone, anyone really

bonus points if it's Komari
because Anna pities her and doesn't really see her as a rival

a nice twist on the tired school love trope

the author chickens out and puts the protag with main girl instead of continuing the twist

what is even the point

I always thought Basori was just generic council girl but she did surprise me but early confession plus the fact she's still a side girl probably means she's out of the race, though she will probably be involved in the later drama, I can see her picking a fight with Komari and one of them going to the hospital

people keep on shouting "author is a hack", but in the end it's what the masses wanted, uninspired slop
it is better for the bottom line

I could roll with this. If Anna does a Sousuke again and doesn't change her ways like Waterman is obviously changing, she deserves the L.

Because chemistry and character interactions have more weight than pulling a twist for the sake of it.

Teiara has become my top 3 along with Anna and Komari, they have the best interactions with Warm water. I hope the author can build up her relationship, it's kinda sad she became a Losing Heroine.

278741683

Schizo is back again.

it's true though

The author seems to have a massive hard on for Anna so I can see Basori getting sabotaged just so Anna can win, maybe they will make Basori go yandere and attack Water or Anna in the final volume to make fans turn on her

She should have been a dyke lesbian.

no one winning is more likely than routes
but both are unlikely, fans want someone to win

Because chemistry and character interactions have more weight than pulling a twist for the sake of it.

you know it's the author that determines the interactions and chemistry, right?

If he forces them to act, sure. But most authors have admitted their initial scenario changed because their characters refused to act according to it. That's why it's a thing for writers to talk about losing control of their characters or how they start writing themselves.

Go Yandere

And then there's being this delusional. There's no need to make the readers hate the rivals. Everyone with a first grader reading comprehension understands the thing between Anna and Waterman. You don't need to undermine anyone to elevate their relationship.

I'm not reading this for Anna

kek sure you don't

changed because their characters refused to act according to it.

nigga you can't possibly believe this. YOU are the author, you have 100% power over everything you write. that's a shit cope of authors who write themselves into a corner or something other, that's it.

Because at the current way it's going it seems that she'll just be handed the win because she's a fan favorite
when all she's been doing so far is the same shit she's been doing to Sosuke before Karen showed up
Making her lose again because of it shows that the author still has common sense

I still believe my sis Basori can steal the bowl.

that's a shit cope of authors who write themselves into a corner or something other, that's it.

It's not a cope, it's literally what they mean by it, they wrote the character in a way that it wouldn't make sense for them to act as the original scenario would require them to, of course they could just make them act out of character and force things to happen but then the quality of the story suffers because of it

Shit like this gives you the HIMYM end, anon. There's plenty of proof in other works about how forcing characters to not follow their natural path has ended in disaster. JK Rowling admitting recently how the bowl winners were a complete mistake.

i'm sorry anons, but i don't see it. if i write a shit code that doesn't do what i want, i rewrite it, simple as.

HIMYM

are we sure Nukumizu is not a victim of the Mermaid theory?
how do the litclub members chart in the Hot-Crazy scale?

handed the win

Waterman going on dates

Anna this Anna that

Waterman being confessed

Yeah nah, I suddenly thought about someone else

Every volume starts or has a non date with Anna

Anna always has his back when things go south

Anna "breaking up" with him is his most vivid recent memory

handed

I can understand waifufagging for someone else. But I can't understand how it can alter your reading comprehension of a run of the mill LN.

same shit

I discarded your argument here, it seems you havd a heavy bias against Anna and you're just hiding this by saying she "deserves" to lose because of your own pre conceived notions regarding the author

anna

girls named tiffany

remon

upper right border of fun zone

goblin

date zone

tiara

marriage zone

zombie

NO GO

asagumo

NO GO

the blonde whatever her name is that mogged anna

fun zone

school pres

marriage zone

megane lit club president

danger zone

Literature

Coding

Jesus anon. You can't be this obtuse and Indian.

Shiratama is breaking that hot-crazy scale anon. The eraser slut is way too powerful.

no argument

ad hominem

and there it is

I am no longer asking
Asagumo must rape Water

It's the truth, posting this smug otter won't break me

Ayano...

Finally someone with common sense

>zombie

NO GO

based zombie unenjoyer

calling her otter

uh huh very convincing

P-Please....no more..m

everyone with a brain already knows anna will win the waterbowl
the question we should be asking is how she'll going to win it and how amamori will try to juggle the relationship dynamics between the main characters in the future volumes

inb4 someone will say makeine becomes your "typical harem romcom sl*p", therefore it's shit

what the fuck do you expect? this is not written by maruto/seo so don't expect heavy love-triangle drama and if you're thinking nukumizu should date outside of the main casts then you're fucking delusional
despite the harem romcom tropes/cliche, i still enjoy it for what it is

so don't expect heavy love-triangle drama

famous last words

I don't think Basori is gonna be the true love triangle drama, if anything that's gonna be Lemon's role.

what the fuck do you expect?

something better

famous last words

you know what i mean, makeine with friendship-breaking love triangle ala WA2 doesn't suit it

something better

for a romcom harem

if you're going to say it, that it's supposed to be a "deconstruction", then you're just making a fool of yourself

yeah big if true
paying readers eat that shit up like candy

if you're going to say it

there's a lot i could say but why do it, when you can just make up my arguments and argue with yourself?

if i write a shit code that doesn't do what i want, i rewrite it, simple as.

last time i checked, a code doesn't have a personality
the way i see your logic is that

"hey i should write an LN with a winning heroine in my mind"

"why the fuck should i bother interacting the MC with other main characters when the whole point is just to make the heroine win"

where's the fun in that?
if anna would just confess to nukumizu without the proper setup, it will feel lazy

last time i checked, a code doesn't have a personality

way to miss the point

the way i see your logic

i'd advise to get your eyes checked

This is gonna devolve into a Hina situation isn't it?

who?

Blue box.

look who's talkingif you want to disapprove my idea, then go ahead

ah I was thinking of another Hina

when you can just make up my arguments and argue with yourself?

because i remember someone unironically described makeine as a "deconstruction" last thread
and the way you act feels like the whole thing is an innovative form of harem romcom and will just dismiss the character bantz/interaction because makeine follows the typical romcom progression

there could only be so many Hina's who lost, right?

Hina will get cucked by Ako.

i just did. your idea of what i think is wrong. there.

that wasn't me anon i'm afraid.
also no, makeine isn't innovative, but it's interesting enough to warrant a nice twisty ending. why have all this setup just to make the boring "main girl wins" ending?
i know why, it's a rethorical question anon.

that's gonna be Lemon's role.

it's hard to think of it when she keeps on shooting herself in the foot

I want comedy first and foremost, and Makeine delivers. Everything else for me is inconsequential.

it will be very funny if anna loses

Nukumizu actually misses Lemon and she has the "knew him since middle school" card.

rewrite

Sure, all it takes is to unpublish several volumes of the story

make the boring "main girl wins" ending?

the only reason why i'm tolerant of makeine is because anna and nukumizu has an enjoyable chemistry
usually for the typical harem setup, the mc and main heroine's interactions are not justifiable enough to warrant a win when compared to the other harem members

see infinite stratos

date a live

"knew him since middle school" card.

this is a bad card in this series
she had it for Ayano, look what happened

bias

am i in some kpop thread

why? you do sketch your whole story beforehand, right?
i mean, unless you're an absolute retard and you don't, and then you just write as you go and write yourself into a corner like a retard
but we're talking about actual smart writers, right anon?

so all this bitching is because you fags just don't want anna to win?

that doesn't make her a strong love triangle contender tho

from the looks of it, amamori's main intention would be anna to win

anna winning = shit story
anna losing = kino story
regardless of who wins the waterman
could be Kaju, it'll be even better imo

why are you changing the topic anon? i asked you a question.

anna to win

lol ok satan

different anon
i'm

MUH SUBVERSION! Is all they have.

allright then, my bad
i'll also agree with some other anon and you that anna and waterman have good chemistry, i think it's one of the things that make makeine more enjoyable

Who the fuck is kpop?

a nice twist on the tired school love trope

the twist is that the mc is dealing with heroines who lose their romance route, imagine a VN when you picked your heroine, people will wonder what happened to the other heroines after you get together with the one you chose

other than that it's basically your typical harem setup

anna winning = shit story

Because you don't like Anna and don't understand the story

sure, i get it anon, i just think it can benefit with some more twists
i understand why most people don't though

Basori's theme when she sees Water pregnant with Anna's child

youtu.be/bTiPATKqf-w?si=Imh-jI6t_keb9LVb

don't get me wrong, i do understand your complaints
but even as a zombiefag, it's kinda pointless for me if i'm expecting shikiya to win
at the very least, the character interactions are fun enough for me to read until the end

Sketch

The point of a sketch is that it can be changed as the final product takes shape

Based lord of hell. Heavenfags in shambles.

i get you anon
i don't really have a horse in this race. i love tiara though, she's the cutest.

zombiefag

ew

too bad

too bad

yeah why did they make her sound retarded?

>the blonde whatever her name is that mogged anna

fun zone

(You)

Shiratama is breaking that hot-crazy scale anon. The eraser slut is way too powerful.

both wrong. Shiratama is in the NO GO zone

Shiratama

sorry i got confused, i meant karen, i get all these anime basic bitches mixed up all the time

it's understandable
Shiratama is blonde
and she also mogged Anna at one point

i can't believe she lost the hardest

imagine losing to that hack lit prez

even the current lit prez is a hack
what do the girls even see to these isekai peddlers?

The current prez is an NTR peddler. He's far worse.

anyone know who are the new stuco?
i heard shiratama is part of the new stuco, sakurai is the VP

i heard shiratama is part of the new stuco

this is so irresponsible
putting corrupt people in power

It's okay. Anna sent her there to cockblock Tiara.

What if Nuku x Prez becomes canon

This. It would be extremely meta, and n a good way.

Every day I pray for Anna's defeat
Don't care who wins

You don’t get to talk back

uh huh I bet you think Haruhi is the best anime since sliced bread huh
let me get your meds old man

Certainly better than most shows. Even a stunted, lesser, underage retard would manage to correctly answer that